tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1364710277141448977.post2646048269494020257..comments2023-10-21T20:14:28.933+11:00Comments on It's all about the writing: There are always two sides to a story...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03257941507705089684noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1364710277141448977.post-70152282265746042162011-08-15T11:49:46.814+10:002011-08-15T11:49:46.814+10:00Thanks for the feedback, Grace.
I think you'v...Thanks for the feedback, Grace.<br /><br />I think you've hit the proverbial nail on the head: a little white space goes a long way!<br /><br />For now I'm trying to keep this story short so it doesn't take too much time away from my longer works.<br /><br />There is always later :)<br /><br />EmanuelAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03257941507705089684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1364710277141448977.post-66388339299875110942011-08-14T22:37:39.718+10:002011-08-14T22:37:39.718+10:00I like it! :) Good feel, and more spread out than ...I like it! :) Good feel, and more spread out than the other - this isn't a solid block of text. Neither feels complete, though... what will happen next?Grace Bridgeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04357028816311898327noreply@blogger.com